very disturbing, just the stuff adults need to see to help us prove cs doesnt provoke violence
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damn sick guy... kill hostages.......have you ever heard something called psychotherapy?Comment
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"the strobe light reaching out to pierce the early morning darkness that hung over the Italian village like a blanket."
So is the strobe light as piercing as a blanket, or is the Italian village the blanket being pierced?Comment
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^ unless I'm missing something here, it seems pretty obvious that the blanket is a simile for the darknessComment
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His age is never mentioned, but I think of him as early to mid twenties
isnt that to to mention he`s age?Comment
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Not for the faint hearted.Comment
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I love those handsome smirking faces.Comment
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Wow. Graphic.
I feel dirty reading just the summayComment
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Edited by [user="13236"] @ [time="1018915767"]
that was gross. but it does open future literary possibilities, like crazy snipers attacking old people while they're making love.
i was typing out a supposed quote from the story along those lines, but i thought better of it. :\Comment
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the first two chapters were better written but this was good enuf... good workComment
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issues.Comment
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Is that the first nime that nasal cavity has been written on this site?Gruesome stuff but not bad.Comment
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Pure violence porn.Comment
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Edited by [user="12412"] @ [time="1018921582"]
you guys r sick voilence n porn dont mix......in most cases
killing old ppl while there having love...thats sick
its sick to talk about old ppl havin sex it makes the hair on your neck go up n ya want to chew something.....hah awping them lol
graphic sick and pointless if u wanna blow some1s face off...play cs dont read cs itll make u a n3rd
HAHAHAH NAZIM OPRESSION DICTATORSHIP thats so typical and childish man that "author" has a simple mind
not only that but there are so many imprecisions..
u cant just grap a sniper rifle aim n shoot n hit something that easilyComment
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That's disgusting. Why would someone write that crap?Comment
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