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So how was it...:)
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somethingawful is funny - not gross...Comment
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Its nothing amazing, the writing is about average. Some of the metaphors dont sound like he wants them to (I'm assuming), but all in all, not bad.
although, Im curious about what kind of ambush includes running down a tunnel at your foes.Comment
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i have read the first thirteen chapters of this before it was posted on CSCentral, in fact i helped him submit them to the site. Thats fair enuff that some of you dont like the stories but saying the author should write gay sex novels aint helping your case. there is a difference between critisism and flaming some 1. and personally i think you guys need to learn how to criticise you have the flaming thing down to a 'T'. if you guys think you can do better shut up and put up. otherwise keep your flames to yourself. He has contributed to this community whereas most of u flamers have only posted derogetory statements in forums etc. give the guy some credit. you might not like him or his work but credit where credit is due.
[KBSM]PhantomComment
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Good story, tho could be written with more balanced rivalry. Maybe in the next chapter the author could create an opponent sniper =). Just an idea.Comment
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Edited by [user="2325"] @ [time="1018958472"]
I read a little more of it and the question "is the author a sadist?" kept coming up.
"The hot desert sun beat down on the terrorist group as they trudged slowly towards their goal is the distance. Overhead, vultures circled, perhaps sensing that there would soon be death on the land below them. Out of the dunes ahead sat the objective, an old French Foreign Legion fort. It seemed to loom out of the desert landscape like a natural outcrop, decades of wind and sand having softened the harsh man-made lines of the fortress into rounded, natural curves."
From there it goes downhill. that isn't bd writing thouh,in the first paragraph.Comment
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Eagle225 wrote..
cause your gay? maybe?
why are posts insulting me always accepted
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snarfle.
Why couldn't it have been "Heart of a Scouter"? At least then he would have had some SKILL.Comment
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theweirdgingerone wrote..
first clever thing ive read since the last thing i said.
snarfle.
Why couldn't it have been "Heart of a Scouter"? At least then he would have had some SKILL.Comment
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^ ya but in real life the scout and the awp kill with one hit so it really does not matter.Comment
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I have the most annoying sig picture ever.
Maybe I will change it soon...Comment
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That guy needs help, y exactly does he think up these stuff eh? What possible reason could there be for writing all of tht graphic shit. He should seek psycholigical treatment imho.
PS i like the stories. im such a hypocrite (is tht how u spell it?)Comment
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damn... both that "recruit" and the guy that wrote that story must have something missing up there....Comment
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Actually, the scout is more of a hunting rifle, and really, any gun kills in one shot. Find the designers of CS and shoot t hem in the head with a 9mm round, see if they live.
Keep up the stories, write because it makes you happy, not for the recognition.Comment
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Edited by [user="22748"] @ [time="1019022616"]Uber_Filet wrote..
Eh.......no.......they would live if they have a kevlar helmet....if they can get it ;-).....
Actually, the scout is more of a hunting rifle, and really, any gun kills in one shot. Find the designers of CS and shoot t hem in the head with a 9mm round, see if they live.
Keep up the stories, write because it makes you happy, not for the recognition.
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^ ya but in real life the scout and the awp kill with one hit so it really does not matter.
AND also if everyone would die from 1 hit of a gun, then why the hell we have fields medics in the army ??????????Comment
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