"Inside the guide there, are a number of lesser known trick jumps, ambush points, camping spots, and tactics are covered."
Yeah, still not fixed buddy... you're one for two on the errors caught. Either of the following would work to fix the other error:
"Inside the guide there are a number of lesser known trick jumps, ambush points, camping spots, and tactics covered."
or...
"Inside the guide, a number of lesser known trick jumps, ambush points, camping spots, and tactics are covered."
Personally I think the 2nd example flows better, but you can take your pick.
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On to the actual subject material. I'm a fan of guides to maps, and this covers some good territory, so thanks for your efforts. :)
Yeah, still not fixed buddy... you're one for two on the errors caught. Either of the following would work to fix the other error:
"Inside the guide there are a number of lesser known trick jumps, ambush points, camping spots, and tactics covered."
or...
"Inside the guide, a number of lesser known trick jumps, ambush points, camping spots, and tactics are covered."
Personally I think the 2nd example flows better, but you can take your pick.
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On to the actual subject material. I'm a fan of guides to maps, and this covers some good territory, so thanks for your efforts. :)
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