CS Fanfiction: The Blue Team

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  • -:Nighthawk:-

    #16
    Yes, likewise they're MiG's (notice little i), and they'd be more likely to fire something like old AIM-9L Sidewinder heat seeking missiles or something, if you really want to use exported American weapons technology. Either that, or just grab some random Russian heat seeker, like the AA-8 Aphid or something, and claim they're using those.



    Hellfire missiles are laser-guided anti-tank (air to ground) weapons, not heat seeking air-to-air. Yes, they're commonly on Apaches, but not relevant in this case. Try something like the AIM-9M Sidewinders if you're wanting a good all-aspect IR guided missile.



    Tomahawks are cruise missiles, so you could mention that name if you wanted to near the end when the buggies are getting destroyed.



    As far as the bullets, really .50 caliber rifles aren't practical weapons for taking out people... a 7.62x51mm sniper rifle like the M24 or Steyr Scout, or even something like a .338 Lapua Magnum AW SM (like the AWP in CS) would be much more appropriate. Also, while the .50 cal is loaded with a cartridge that's roughly 5" long, the bullet itself is something closer to 2" in length, and the rest is just powder.



    In the end though, all of this is all the kind of little stuff that a talented editor would bring to this series. It's a good read still, but yes, flu1d, I'd recommend you find someone to proof-read your stuff. :)

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    • -MuLDeR

      #17
      Agent Mulder meets SK.swe and they have a Battle Royal to save planet earth you say?
      heh

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      • Gpig

        #18
        -:Nighthawk:- wrote..

        In the end though, all of this is all the kind of little stuff that a talented editor would bring to this series. It's a good read still, but yes, flu1d, I'd recommend you find someone to proof-read your stuff. :)
        Preferably not Nighthawk though, he's named after a retail desert eagle.

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        • alien23

          #19
          fluid - if u need someone to proof read your work you have but to ask.



          good stuff :)

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          • flu1d

            #20
            Thanks for the support guys. Like I said this is my first attempt at fictional work and I know it needs improving. Nighthawk has already offered to proof read as has a real life friend who has loads of qualifications in English.



            If you can email me @ flu1d@flu1d.co.uk alien23 so I have you email listed.



            I should have the next mission finished by wednesday so I'll email out copies then expected for an early morning (GMT) return on Friday so it can be released Friday night, ofcourse names will be mentioned for proof reading.



            The forum to discuss and add ideas for the next mission and future missions is www.csgn.co.uk.



            Thanks again for the support!

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            • -:Nighthawk:-

              #21
              Gpig, if you ever claim that CS Retail came out before I got this name again, I shall think evil thoughts about you!



              ...well, for lack of any real ability to hunt you down and beat you silly, that's about the most I can do. Grrrr, here I thought it was all cool back then that they renamed a gun after me, heh. But then came the floods of retail morons who stole my name, and now people assume that I'm just another of them. Bah, evilness...

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