Terrible Tunak - The Jihad Of Mr. Patel Released

[I am RKO]

Re: Terrible Tunak - The Jihad Of Mr. Patel Released

Thanks for the feedback, everyone.

I don't recommend you respond to negative feedback as a joke.

To be be perfectly honest I did not enjoy it. The editing was done well for the most part, though I thought the bullet shot through the ear seemed very fake; it would have been better if it had just narrowly missed him. As usual, the voice overs seemed flat and I was very aware that they were edited in. I had no sense of what was going on and the fact that there was no strong story line makes me dislike it even more.

I agree with Xan as well.

Maybe also the fact that it had "RKO" on it, made it even worse.

Anyways, like it or hate it, doesn't really matter. I've looked at the criticisms and the praise, and i have to say, percentage wise more like it than not, so it's a basis on which to build for the future.

[Elxx]

Re: Terrible Tunak - The Jihad Of Mr. Patel Released

Anyways, like it or hate it, doesn't really matter. I've looked at the criticisms and the praise, and i have to say, percentage wise more like it than not, so it's a basis on which to build for the future.

Wow, brilliant way to improve on constructive feedback! "Screw you guys who tried to help, more people liked it, so I don't care!"

I didn't understand it, never really knew who "Mr. Patel" was, and I got bored with the loooooong chase scene. Not saying I could do better, but it was just dull. The description made it sound like something with a nice storyline and stuff, but instead it was just "LOLOLOL BLOWJOB". The subtitles were amusing.

Maybe if you ditch the storyline thing and just turn it into random comedic skits, it would work out better.

[I am RKO]

Re: Terrible Tunak - The Jihad Of Mr. Patel Released

I like the idea of skits. Trouble is, skit films get typecast with a certain film.

I didn't say screw people who don't like it. However, the fact that more people liked it overall than didn't, is for me, a success.

Subtitles are universally funny, because people we can't understand are funny.

This has the ability to evolve into something, a platform.

I don't want this thread to turn into a flame thread, so I am not going to reply to any posts onwards from this one, I'm just going to write things down on notepad and try and apply the fixes for the mistakes on the next adventure.

[ThQp]

Re: Terrible Tunak - The Jihad Of Mr. Patel Released

good for you, using notepad.
i liked it but some of the guys are right. If i hadnt read what spawndemon posted as an introduction i wouldnt have had a clue what was going on. Overally nice job RKO.

[junaum]

Re: Terrible Tunak - The Jihad Of Mr. Patel Released

GOD, the first Machinima Blowjob ever! Pretty fun!

[GrossKopf]

Re: Terrible Tunak - The Jihad Of Mr. Patel Released

I want the 27 minutes of my life back that it took to download that.

[Sir. GenX000]

Re: Terrible Tunak - The Jihad Of Mr. Patel Released

I thought it was stupid!:p

But wasn't it supposed to be? To me, that's what made it funny!
I liked it, good job:)

(I didn't read Spawn's desc.)

[machstem]

Re: Terrible Tunak - The Jihad Of Mr. Patel Released

Like, it wasn't ALL bad, but it could have used a little fine tuning. I give you an "e" for effort

PEACE

[Sir. Shpox]

Re: Terrible Tunak - The Jihad Of Mr. Patel Released

I personally did not like you movie.
Why ? I generally got bored, and wasn't entertained. The main thing I picked up on was the start of the movie, I didn't find the UAV entertaining and it didn't really leave me for watching more. If you had constructed your back story, rather than leaving it out, it would have made more sense and would have provided a more int resting value. I didn't like the chase scenes, seem dull although the camera angles were nice.

I thought the Cobra scene was strange to. Mainly for the fact that a guy in a Cobra worth more than a million dollars was afraid of a guy with an AK47, but hey, others may have enjoyed this, it was the lack of plausibility that didn't appeal to me.

I thought the bullet was nice, it seemed to fit into your storyline but the reason he fell off was again, not very plausible.
The only thing I enjoyed was mainly the subtitles, these were well done.

Please don't see this as an "attack", this is merely my opinion. Whether it matters to you or not is not of my concern.

[imported_BlackCougar]

Re: Terrible Tunak - The Jihad Of Mr. Patel Released

Nice movie man!
I liked it, it was different.
The ghost of the MEC soldier appearing and disappearing reminded me of that chick in F.E.A.R.

[jameslcfc]

Re: Terrible Tunak - The Jihad Of Mr. Patel Released

The ghost of the MEC soldier appearing and disappearing reminded me of that chick in F.E.A.R.

Yeah, same here :) But..chick? It's a ghost and she's like 10..how old are you? :p

[Eden]

Re: Terrible Tunak - The Jihad Of Mr. Patel Released

Definitely different. The plot was fairly unique, it has some good effect (the bullet) and the editing is fairly well done however it is way to long, with shorter cuts and an overall shorter length people wont get board with some scenes dragging on so to speak.

Good short though, well done.

[Mo0by]

Re: Terrible Tunak - The Jihad Of Mr. Patel Released

The bullet time was cool....

[Zybergod]

Re: Terrible Tunak - The Jihad Of Mr. Patel Released

A+ for the effort. I will say the blowjob thing ruined it for me. That was so foul and just.. stupid.

[COD_FILLETS]

Re: Terrible Tunak - The Jihad Of Mr. Patel Released

I liked the movie. Nice editing job, I especially liked the "dubbing" for the MEC guy. The thing I didnt really like was the fact that there was not much of a plot, it was kind of random.

8/10 - Editing
4/10 - Plot
8/10 - Creativeness
6.5/10 - Overall