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  • R.E.M.F.

    #1

    holy war

    my first movie ever constuctive criticism please.

  • Decripfy

    #2
    donwloading

    uhhh first impreesions in the first 20 secs look boring...

    omg sorry that was ****.. boring and noobish

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    • R.E.M.F.

      #3
      Re: holy war

      thank you, for your Constructive reply...

      ill say this. i know this movies not "the shi7" but im not looking for replys on what im doing in the movie, just how i have it set up and how i can do better im sure theres lots of ways. please post your oppinion.

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      • Decripfy

        #4
        Re: holy war

        try doing stunts or skillful combat without dying or knifing

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        • imported_Gen_Brett

          #5
          Re: holy war

          (I'm making this post as I watch)

          That song has been used before.

          The beginning was stupid. You shot a car.

          The quality looks really bad.

          You drove around and suicided. We had to watch the "You have been killed and will respond in X seconds"

          Ok, I gave up halfway through. All you did the entire movie was suicide. Not entertaining. You showed all the HUD. It as bad. <sarcasm>Nice hour of black at the end.</sarcasm>

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          • antoine

            #6
            Re: holy war

            To long for nothing.

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            • Garabaldi

              #7
              Re: holy war

              Don't mind Sir. Decripfry, as usual, he proves time and time again, that he obviously drank something under the sink in his youth.

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              • R.E.M.F.

                #8
                Re: holy war

                the movie was about suicide bombing with the go-karts.

                sry you found it boring, but if you could add how to make it better that'd be great.

                yeah i made the movie in 3 hours and didn't try and make it look to good just wanted to try making a movie and i found it fun =) so mission accomplished.

                i dont know why it does that at the end with all black nothing-ness.

                ill make a video of my friend and i doin our bomber and heli thing and not play music. it seems all songs that would fit the scene has been used and looked down at.

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                • Sir. Xios

                  #9
                  Re: holy war

                  A interesting attempt at you first movie, nice try.
                  Just a few pointers,

                  1) When filming type "render.drawhud 0" first. It gets rid of all the ugly writing a stuff.

                  2) When editing try to cut out as much of the boring stuff as possible, and try to make it flow nicely. (e.g. fade from one clip to another or, what ever your desired effect.) Watching you drive around to much fun, and mainly watching the spawn screen.

                  3) Try to learn to use Battle recorder, or freecam mode (and film someone else doing stuff). this way you get more intresting angles which make it easier to watch.

                  4) Remember that even boring gameplay can be turned into a good movie if edited well.

                  Good luck with your next movie, i'll be waiting.

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                  • R.E.M.F.

                    #10
                    Re: holy war

                    thank you very much taking all of this in and applying it in my next endevours (spelling )

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                    • rnu

                      #11
                      Re: holy war

                      uh... I would say the title doesnt fit unless you try to link it with the music (sounded aribic or w/e)
                      Felt more like a documentry then a movie. "Life of the sucide bomber"
                      When making a movie trying having a point to it, a goal. Its simple but you didnt really meet it or you did and it was a bad goal XD idk i tried to help

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                      • Gawwad

                        #12
                        Re: holy war

                        Originally posted by Sir. Decripfy
                        donwloading
                        What's the point in spamming stuff like that?
                        And 3 posts with no point in any of them that was worth pointing out...

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                        • imported_shadow_vision

                          #13
                          Re: holy war

                          yea ... interesting idea .... i think that is something ppl do when they are bored and just wanna suicide-kill a tank or sumthing but as a video ... it needs more ... spice. For instance ... if u were to follow a tank through a city as he pwned our teamm8s and then cut him off for the kill or something ... gives the movie a mini story idea as the viewers watch you sneak your way up on the tank. Ramming into any enemy vehicle only to die (and not get kill half the time) is not entertaining ... with a slightly different theme i think ppl will enjoy your movies more.

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                          • imported_UH60BHPilot

                            #14
                            Re: holy war

                            The music was cool. The video quality itself was... hard to watch at best. And the story was intresting, but it could have more "Meat" on it.

                            7/10 for your first movie.

                            BTW where can I get the full version of that song? I only found the sample of it...

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                            • imported_UH60BHPilot

                              #15
                              Re: holy war

                              :cry: Please tell me!

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