Film Finished

**Decripfy** · 11-27-2005, 05:49 PM

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umm can ya watch it on windows media player?

**SnY_pEr** · 11-27-2005, 06:21 PM

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Wow it was choppy over here...

I also didnt like the beggining... and its just the regular stuff...

ill give you a 6/10

**imported_Gen_Brett** · 11-27-2005, 06:55 PM

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Triple post.

Anyway, I'm downloading now. Comments later if I remember.

**imported_Gen_Brett** · 11-27-2005, 07:33 PM

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Ok, um, well I have alot to say.

The beginning was really corny in my opinion, the "briefing" (if you call it that) the music, I just didn't like it. It was also really laggy. There were other lag parts, but the beginning was the worse. Overall, the beginning was horrible.

The jet sounds (not the voices but the plane itself) we're really out of place.

The music was ok, but it really didn't flow with the movie. It was just kind of there. Also, I hate music with voices in BF2 movies. Really annoying in my opinion. Plus that one song that had voice made me sick. I didn't like it.

The storyline was probably the best part. However it was just kind of random. Pilot goes on random bombing runs, repeating some areas, destroyes jet, bombs, shoots, kill plane, lather rinse repeat.

The camera was pretty good. No names, no HUD, I'm glad. I would've likes some more views that weren't following the same plane the entire time. (There was one but, wasn't what I wanted)

The ending when you said "Thx 4 Watching" "Coming Soon Da Stunt Film". It may just be a pet peeve of mine but I hate it when people put stupid alternate ways of putting "Thanks" "for" or "the".

Oh yeah, you totally didn't mention anyone but the editor in the credits.

Rating:
Storyline: 8/10
Music: 2/10
Sound Effects: 7/10
Camera: 7/10
Graphics: 7/10

Overall: 6.2/10

Suggestions:
Change music and work with it as you edit. (i.e. if something loud happens in the music, make something big happen on screen.)

Get some more camera angles. On the ground, following the enemy plane, etc.

Remove the jet sounds, keep the voices.

**Buck4** · 11-28-2005, 04:21 PM

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Thx i shall definatly keep that in mind next time. I admit i did rush the sound tracks just wanted to get it finished. Also answer to above question, yes it does work in wmplayer as well :)