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  • Avenger_One

    #1

    Hot Drop

    I wrote a bit of a story on this forum previously, but longer stories really aren't my thing, and as such, it didn't make it past the first chapter.

    That said, I rather like short stories - so I decided to create my own and post it hear for you guys (and gals) to read.

    Hope you enjoy!



    The air transports engines thrummed steadily beneath the private's combat boots. Private Luke Bailey, attached to the 3rd Regiment, striking back at the PAC forces occupying some city who's name he'd forgotten. He moved his shoulders nervously - outside of the training camp, he had never seen action.

    Beside him was The Captain, his squad's leader. He put his hand reassuringly on the private's shoudler but said nothing.

    Ahead the pilot began speaking into his radio.

    "This is Eagle Two to ground forces, we are approaching our LZ."

    "Roger that Eagle Two. Be advised the area is hot."

    "Copy that. Eagle Two over and out."

    The private closed his eyes taking them off of his comrades and turning them inside. He didn't think that he's ready for what was to come; not by a long shot.

    That's when he heard something new. Something high pitched.

    The radio filled with panicked yells "This is Eagle Three! Gunships! I see gunships!"

    "Talon Leader here, we're engaging. All transports proceed to the LZ."

    At the front of the transport alarms sounded.

    The pilot yelled back to them. "Missiles incoming! Activating shields!"

    The private looked out of the transport's hold, in time to see the green orb of protection burst into existence around the VTOL. He heard the missiles impact, dull thuds. Then another sound. Holes being punched in the transport's armor.

    "We're taking fire!" Yelled the pilot.

    The private's eyes locked onto the attacker - a gunship diving at the transport. Then the transport dropped.

    "Going evasive!" The pilot bellowed belatedly.

    "Hold on!" Yelled The Captain.

    The private heard an explosion behind him and began to pray silently.

    "Engine two is out! We're losing altitude!"

    The private looked down - a mistake. The ground was approaching fast and he could see the LZ. They weren't going to make it. Not by a long shot.

    There was another explosion.

    "There goes steering! Sit tight!"

    The private gripped his rifle tight as buildings lept up around the transport.

    "Twenty meters!" The pilot screamed.

    There was a split second of silence and then a massive explosion as something obliterated the front of the VTOL. Flames licked into the rear, envelopping a soldier, who began howling and beating at his suit as the transport began plumetting.

    The Captain swore loudly and grabbed his harness. Everyone did.

    "BRACE!" The Captain bellowed.

    Then the transport struck the ground. The impact jarred everyone. Then the transport was airborne again for an instant before it struck the ground again and began skidding. The sound was horrible as armor was stripped from the craft's underbelly by the pavement bellow. There was a finally jarring impact, accompanied by the sound of metal being crushed and the transport stopped moving.

    "Everyone out! Go go go!" The Captain yelled, tearing off his harness.

    The private was dazed and fumbled unsucessfully for his harness. It took two tries before he managed to undo it. Then he climbed to his feet and staggered out of the burning transport. Beside him another soldier exited and was promptly cut down by machine-gun fire.

    The private gapped. He couldn't believe it - Roland, a man he'd trained with since he'd joined, had just died before firing a single shot. He was unaware of the fact that he was standing in the middle of the street, where the transport had collided with the remains of a tank. He heard gunfire start again, the bullets coming for him - he was going to die here, just like Ro -

    Then he was slammed to the ground as The Captain tackled him down.

    "Take cover!" He yelled into the private's face.

    Around the two of them the remains of the squad began taking cover behind pieces of wreckage and returned fire.

    The Captain lept to his feet and pulled the private with him. "Stay low soldier." He commanded before pushing him towards the remains of the transport. Luke nodded dumbly.

    Down the street there was a crash of thunder followed by an explosion and a rain of asphalt.

    "Carver! Nail that tank NOW!" Screamed The Captain.

    Nearby, the soldier in question began aiming his rocket launcher.

    "No good sir!" He yelled. "Shields are up!"

    The Captain took that in as he began screaming into his radio.

    "This is Delta Squad! We're pinned down down by armor and need support!"

    The private vaguely heard a reply.

    "Bailey!" The Captain grabbed his shoulder. "I need you to establish LOS with that tank so that our gunship can shove a missle where the sun don't shine. Got that?"

    "Ye-yes sir." The private responded shakily. He felt better with The Captain there, but the whole situation was proving to be too much for him.

    Regardless, he poked his head around the wreckage and looked at the tank. Just staring at it. He felt like an idiot. All around him there were people shooting and there he was, staring at the tank so a gunship that might NEVER come could take a shot it might mi-

    The private never saw the rocket, but he bore witness to it's after effects. The tank's main gun split from it's body and flew forwards as an explsion envelopped the top of the vehicle and threw it down on the pavement, crushing it's hoverpads.

    The private wipped his head back around in time to see The Captain flash him a thumbs-up. More gunfire bit into the still-burning transport.

    "Thank you Talon Three! Alright guys, we need to get out of the street. Our objective is to make it to the LZ from here." The Captain waited for them to acknowledge his comment before continuing. "We're going to cross the street and enter that building -" he pointed to it "- while some of us provide cover fire. Ok?"

    They told him that it was.

    "Alright. Covering fire!" He yelled, spinning out from behind the ruins of the vehicles and firing his rifle. The private dashed for the building. Bullets skipped off of the pavement around him, angry hornets waiting to sting. He dove into the building, then picked himself up and ran to a window. He began spraying wildly into the street as the rest of the squad - now just six others - joined him.

    There was a click as the weapon ran dry and the private reloaded quickly, rembering his training.

    "Alright. Good work people. According to command, there should be a friendly vehicle column nearby that could bring us to the LZ. We just need to make it to them before they pass. Got that?" Nods. "Then let's move!"

    The Captain led the way out of the building, through a door into an alley filled with debris.

    "Carver! Check the corner!"

    The soldier advanced carefully then poked his head around the corner.

    "All clear!" He yelled.

    "Go go go!" The Captain yelled.

    The squad began sprinting across the street. They never had a chance.

    A battle walker, a T-39 Bogatyr, rounded a corner down the street, all guns blazing. Instantly three soldiers were torn apart. Luke dove for cover, landing in a hole beside Carver, who was bleeding heavily.

    "Oh man, oh man..." he moaned. Luke stared at him, not knowing what to do.

    Carver's leg had been removed at the knee.

    "Luke? That you?"

    "Yeah Carver, it's me."

    "My launcher is in the hole right?" He asked weakly.

    "Yeah but I don't think-"

    "Shut up. The trigger fires it, I've got extra ammunition in my pack. You just slap it in the side..." He pointed to the weapon in question, indicating the area. "You can guide the missiles with the launcher's LOS. Got that?"

    "Yeah, yeah, but Carver I don't think -"

    "This is the squad's only launcher. Use it. You're a decent shot Bailey. You can make it. Aim for the knees..." Carver's breathing began coming in ragged gasps.

    "Just hang on!" Into the radio he yelled "I need a medic!"

    The Captain responded instantly. "Bailey? That you?"

    "Yes sir."

    "Anyone with you?"

    "Carver sir, but he's wounded badly."

    "Alright. I can see William from my position, but he's unconscious."

    "What do we do?"

    "Give me a second..."

    There was the sound of appraoching footsteps. Heavy, armored footsteps.

    "Sir?!"

    "Stay calm private."

    Closer. Thump. Thump. Thump.

    "SIR?!"

    The battlewalker appeared. But it was facing the wrong way and -

    The L5 Riesig began firing.

    The private grabbed the missile launcher and clambered to the edge of the hole.

    The newly arrived walker's missiles slammed into the PAC machine's shields, detonating harmlessly. The Bogatyr returned fire, but it's missiles slammed into shields as well.

    Both sets of defense faded and havoc broke loose. The EU Walker's missiles slammed into the Bogatyr's upper body, blasting holes in it's torso.

    A set of PAC missiles blasted into the Riesig, blowing apart one of the machine's chain guns, raining debris on the street below.

    The private took aim, settling the crosshairs over the PAC Walker's right knee. The machine took a step backwards and he adjusted his aim. Taking a deep breath, he fired.

    The set of missiles flew away with astounding speed and slammed into the walker's knee, blowing it apart. The machine stood for a moment before toppling to the side.

    The Riesig pointed it's remaining chaingun at the private, who gasped in fear. However, the pilot had nothing but good intentions as he waggled the gun back in forth in a gesture of thanks before sending the machine marching forwards, footsteps shaking the ground.

    __________________________________________________ _______________

    Anyways, that's all for now... I promise I'll finish it (if people want me too).

    Let me know what you think!

    -Avenger_One
  • Animal

    #2
    that rocks.. lol

    FINISH IT! lol

    and read my pm!

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    • Avenger_One

      #3
      Thanks for the encouragement!

      (I apologize for spelling errors, I correct what I catch but I don't really proof read so there are going to be a number).

      As for the rest...


      ___________


      "Good shot Bailey." The Captain announced, emerging from behind a fallen pile of concrete. He moved past the private and began shaking William.

      The other soldier came too slowly.

      "William! Snap to!" The Captain commanded. Awareness sprung into the other soldiers eyes.

      "Sir! Yes sir!" He barked.

      Nearby Bailey droppped the spent launcher to the ground and picked up his rifle. He glanced at Carver and noticed, to his horror, that the rise and fall of the other man's chest had halted. His comrade had entered the deepest of all sleeps, never to be awakened again.

      "Bailey! Attention!"

      The private sprung up, readying his assault rifle.

      "Alright you two, despite what's just happend, we've still got some work to do. We still need to hook up with the column moving on the LZ before it passes us."

      The two remaining soldiers nodded.

      Then a sniper round blew apart William's head.

      "GET DOWN!" Screamed The Captain, diving for cover as the private stumbled backwards in shock, tumbling head over heels into the hole next to Carver. As he fell he lost his grip on his rifle and it flew from his grip. The private went as pale as the man next to him.

      "Bailey? You still there?"

      "Yes sir. I lost my weapon sir."

      "Stay calm. Are there any other weapons nearby?"

      The private eyeballed the rocket launcher.

      "Yes sir. Carver's AT launcher."

      "Use it."

      The private reached out and pulled the weapon to himself. He fumbled with it clumsily before managing to eject the spent cartridge. Bailey looked about for ammunition before he remembered where it was.

      Reaching over, his arm trembling, the private reached into one of Carver's pockets and pulled out a pair of missile magazines. He pushed one into the launcher.

      "Reloaded. What now?" Bailey asked, breathing hard. He couldn't believe that he'd just touched a dead body.

      "Well..." There was a moment of silence as The Captain thought through his options.

      "Private, I'm going to throw a smoke grenade. We'll use the cover to enter that building. I'm marking it on your HUD."

      A blinking icon appeared on the private's visor with the distance to it listed.

      Twenty-Three meters.

      The private did the math. He would be exposed for almost three seconds. That was more than enough time for the sniper.

      On top of that, he still needed to retrieve his rifle.

      "On three Bailey. One, two, THREE!"

      The Captain lobbed the smoke grenade high. There was a sharp report as the sniper fired hastily, missing The Captain's exposed arm. Then the grenade made contact with the ground. It exploded violently, throwing clouds of thick white smoke in all directions.

      The private dove for his rifle, grabbed it, jumped from the hole and ran.

      In his panic he failed to account for the rubble on the ground and tripped.

      It saved his life.

      The sniper round bit through the space he had just occupied and burried itself in the pavement ahead. The private gasped and jumped to his feet, ran another few meters and dove for the doorway. He fell a bit short, his upper torso landing just inside the building.

      Strong hands grabbed his shoulders and pulled hard. In a flash the private was inside the building.

      "Thank you sir." He gasped.

      "No need Bailey." The Captain replied smoothly. "Now catch your breath. We're not out of this yet."

      _________


      There will be more to follow soon, but at the moment I've run short of time!

      Hope you're enjoying it so far!

      -Avenger_One

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      • General Sniper

        #4
        this is absolutely amasing,i have to say that you could write a book about this. its already good and you've only wrote a chapter or 2, and it sounds a bit like the Sharpe series, an extremely good book series

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        • Mazee

          #5
          Nice Keep going!

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          • Animal

            #6
            i love this story.. cant wait to hear the rest..

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            • Avenger_One

              #7
              Thanks again, here's the next part...

              _________

              The private climbed to his feet as The Captain paced around the windowless room. Trash and pieces of debris littered the ground. Spent cartridges formed small piles on the ground, making it trecherous to walk on.

              As Luke moved deeper into the building he almost lost his balance on the empty casings, but The Captain steadied him with a hand to his back.

              "Any ideas Bailey?"

              "No sir."

              There was a moment of silence before The Captain spoke again.

              "Follow me."

              The pair moved through the building. Suddenly gunfire broke out. The pair dove for cover. Then they exchanged glances.

              No one was shooting at them, but whoever was shooting sounded very close.

              "Sounded like a Kyrlov to me. What do you think?" The Captain asked.

              The private had no idea. He just nodded.

              "The sounded like they were upstairs. Let's go."

              The private fell in behind The Captain as he moved on a stairwell, his gun ready to cut down anyone foolish enough to cross him.

              The duo entered the stairwell and made their way to the second floor.

              Suddenly the gunfire started again and the pair slapped themsevles against the walls, weapons ready. There was the sound of return fire, a pair of heavy machine guns raking the building's front.

              Suddenly their radios crackled to life.

              "Hello? This is Sargent Tipper. You just appeared on my HUD. We're pinned down in the street. As far as I can make out, we're taking fire from the building your in. Care to help?"

              The Captain responded quietly, not wanting to tip the enemy off to their position.

              "This is Captain Cortez. We're moving on the enemy in the building."

              Tipper spoke again.

              "I think they're on the second floor. I'm marking where I think they are on your HUD."

              "Thanks." Still whispering.

              On Bailey's visor a blinking icon appeared once more. As far as he could tell, the suspected enemy position was on the other side of the wall he and The Captain were against.

              The Captain looked over his shoulder at the private and motioned for him to retreat back to the stairwell.

              As Bailey moved back he kept his eyes on The Captain, who pulled a grenade from his belt, pulled the pin and rolled into the room. Then he turned and began sprinting towards the private.

              There was the sound of a few cries of panic followed by an explosion.

              A single trooper emerged from the room and The Captain promptly gunned him down.

              The private remained motionless, seeing the bullets fly in slow motion, striking the soldier and throwing him to the ground as The Captain's gun thundered, spilling spent cartridges to the floor, a copper waterfall that crashed to a steel river.

              Then it was over.

              The Captain spared a glance at the private.

              "Are you alright Bailey?"

              The private replied shakily. "Y-yes sir."

              "Let's check the room."

              The pair moved forwards, The Captain with confidence, the private with something less.

              The room turned out to be empty of living soldiers. However, the carnage was enough to make Bailey's stomach churn.

              "Cortez? This is Tipper. We see you. Is the room clear?"

              "It's clear. Mind if we join you? My squad was torn to pieces. All that remains is Private Bailey and myself."

              "Sure. We'll hold here."

              The pair made their way through the building, then through the street to meet up with Tipper and the five members of his squad.

              "Alright. Cortez, Bailey. Welcome to Gamma Squad. We've been tasked with taking out an anti-aircraft battery set up in a park around here."

              The private and The Captain exchanged looks.

              "You know it?" Tipper asked.

              "We met once." The Captain replied, tight lipped.

              Tipper didn't ask about it anymore, sensing that it had something to do with the absence of the other men in Cortez's squad.

              "We were on our way to it when we were pinned down here. Then you showed up and cleared them out, so... we'll be on our way once more."

              The group began advancing once more, working up the deserted road.

              Finally they reached the final corner before the park. The private could hear the sound of the anti-aircraft guns firing, intermitently broken by the sound of a missile firing.

              The Captain poked his head around the corner.

              "There's certainly alot of them."

              Tipper gestured to one of his men, a man wielding what Bailey believed to be a HMG, to come forwards. The two exchanged a look and the other soldier nodded, pulling a gadget from his belt.

              He pushed a button and suddenly a sea of red diamonds light up the private's visor.

              Someone swore.

              Tipper seemed slightly rattled.

              The Captain however, remained stoic.

              He snuck another look around the corner before turning back to Tipper.

              "I can hit the two nearest installations with smoke grenades. Once they're blind we can spray them with gunfire. They these two -" he gestured to the soldiers carrying HMGs, "- can provide cover fire as we run for these postions." Bailey's HUD light up with the different possibilities, behind a destroyed tank, behind a small barricade, inside of a hole and behind a pile of debris. "Once there we'll cover one of you while you run for this position. Then you both provide suppressive fire. You -" he pointed to a man carrying a rocket launcher "- will need to hit the installations while we're doing this."

              Tipper spoke up. "What about the infantry? We're really outnumbered here."

              The Captain looked him in the eye. "Then we'll have to fight really hard."

              There was a moment of silence as the group considered this.

              Then The Captain reached for his two remaining smoke grenades. He pulled the first one's pin and launched it, hitting on of the guns head on and covering it in smoke. Then the second was airborne, landing a foot from it's target, but blanketing it none the less. Then the two machine guns began firing.

              The private started running.


              ________

              That's enough for now, just thought I'd leave you guys with a cliffhanger to shake things up.

              -Avenger_One

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              • General Sniper

                #8
                awww.. cliffhanger... darn, must have more! anyways good story, i'm gonna follow this till the end

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                • Avenger_One

                  #9
                  Well I found some more time to write today, so I'll add a bit more.


                  ________

                  Bailey was sprinting for the concrete barrier, following The Captain. Just behind them were the four other members of Tipper's squad, including Tipper himself.

                  In a flash everyone was behind cover. Bailey and The Captain were behind the concrete barrier, Tipper in the hole, two others paired behind the ruined tank and the last one diving into the hole.

                  The private leaned around the barrier, gun blazing. Beside him The Captain did the same. Their bullets blasted across the park, blasting into trees, kicking up turf and knocking soldiers aside.

                  One of Tipper's HMG men began running, his legs pumping as his gun swung wildly back and forth. A blast of return fire blew holes in the pavement at his feet but miraculously did not manage to hit him. Then he was behind cover, in the hole with another soldier.

                  Suddenly Bailey heard a click. What the hell went click?

                  He turned back to the cover, hiding.

                  Click?

                  Then it dawned on him.

                  The private popped free the empty magazine and tossed it away, drawing a new one from a pocket, slamming it home and cocking the weapon. The he spun back to begin firing once more.

                  Bullets skipped off of the concrete all around him as the enemy counter attack began in force.

                  Beside Bailey The Captain swung back, hiding from the incoming bullets. He glanced over at the private., smiling crookedly.

                  "I guess the plan still has a few kinks. There's more of them than I'd thought."

                  A small object whistled by, exploding in the hole nearby. Two cries of pain ensued.

                  "Damn it." The Captain cursed.

                  Tipper's panicked voice broke in.

                  "Cortez? What the hell do we do?"

                  The Captain replied back, as calm as ever.

                  "Hold your position. They can't take it from you unless you let them!"

                  For a moment the private was inspired.

                  Then he felt it.

                  The heavy thumping. It was getting closer.

                  He looked over at The Captain.

                  It was The Captain who spoke first.

                  "We're not finished yet private. When that walker shows up, we're giving it everything we've got!"

                  The private nodded and peeked around the concrete.

                  Bullets tore around him, angry hornets waiting to sting in a world where everyone had a fatal allergy.

                  The thumping drew nearer.

                  The private breathed a prayer.

                  He watched it come around a distant corner and gasped.

                  __________


                  I ran out of time again! Sorry for the second cliffhanger.

                  -Avenger_One

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                  • Animal

                    #10
                    i dont like u... ur doing too much cliffhangers.. and just making it longer for me 2 re-write it.. lol! i got to seperate it into like 4 pieces or more like u have.. otherwise gonna b huge! lol

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                    • Dtneter
                      Member
                      • Jul 2007
                      • 1158

                      #11
                      i like the story keep it up

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                      • Avenger_One

                        #12
                        @ Animal - it isn't actually that long. It's only 3500ish words (the double spacing makes it seem like a lot more, but if I don't double space the paragraphs clump together and it becomes a mess to read).

                        @ Everyone else, thanks!

                        _______

                        The private watched, stunned, as the battlewalker advanced into the enemy line, joining to their rear and pushing them forwards.

                        Then he noticed something else.

                        A lone chaingun hung from the walker's cratered torso. It started spinning.

                        "This is Valkyrie Three to friendly infantry, hold your positions."

                        Lead began flying from the Riesig's chain gun, a deadly spray that cut through the enemy infantry like a hot knife through butter. Actually, it was faster than that.

                        Like the sun through a bowl of ice cream.

                        The private spun back behind the barricade as the lead came a bit closer and ricochets began blasting through the air around him.

                        The Captain was smiling.

                        "I guess the cavalry is here."

                        The private shivered. The massacre on the other side of the barricade was not, in his opinion, worth smiling about.

                        The gunfire stopped for a moment and there were a few explosions as the walker levelled the AA guns using it's missiles.

                        "All clear boys. You can come out now."

                        The remaining infantry emerged, the private averting his eyes from the ruined bodies all across the park. Instead he focused on the walker.

                        The turret on top was aimed squarely at the infantry before it, evaluating them.

                        The Captain was the first to address their savior.

                        "Thanks for the timely arrival Valkyrie Three. We couldn't have survived if not fo-"

                        A lone projecticle flew at the walker, striking it's left mounted missile launcher. The explosion was large, but nothing in comparison to what happened next.

                        The force of the blast, coupled with the heat, managed to set off the remaining ammunition stored in the launcher.

                        In the blink of an eye a massive fireball ripped through the walker, knocking it sideways and blowing it's torso to a thousand pieces.

                        Tipper was screaming.

                        "Pilum round! Take cover!"

                        The private dove to the ground as gunfire ripped across the park, knocking one of Tipper's men down with a vengence. The Captain rolled behind a tree and began returning fire. One of the soldiers carrying a HMG crawled to a log and propped himself against it before returning fire.

                        Suddenly a new way of gunfire broke out, this coming from the opposite side of the park. There were a number of loud swears as the remains of Tipper's squad were split between the two groups of attackers.

                        The private crawled forwards on his stomach, bullets filling the air above him. A few rounds landed in the snow nearby, through small clouds of it into the air.

                        The Captain yelled to him.

                        "Bailey! I need you over here!"

                        The private responded by turning himself around and crawling behind a small rise near The Captain.

                        Tipper bellowed; "We need a plan Cortez!"

                        "I'M THINKING!" The Captain yelled back as he slapped another magazine into his rifle.

                        The private climbed to the top of the rise and began firing, his rifle bashing against his shoulder with every shot as he attemtped to keep his aim steady. Fire in bursts. That was the first rule.

                        He did so, his short bursts adding the building symphony of war. The HMGs provided a strong bass line while the lighter machine guns light up the score with a variety of sounds; shells hitting the ground, near misses buzzing by soldier's heads, bolts clicking back and forth in a steady rythm.

                        The private trained his gun on one man in particular and fired a burst. The shots flew by, not managing to hit him, but enough to make him dive for the ground.

                        Nearby Tipper yelled "Cover me!" as he pulled something off of his back.

                        The private glanced back and saw the sargent activate a drone. A gun drone.

                        It leapt into the air and spun around for a heartbeat before aquiring it's first target. With a beep it began firing.

                        Then Bailey turned back to his target and fired again.

                        Another miss.

                        He fired again and was rewarded with a hit. The man went down, grabbing his knee.

                        The private tried to fire again, but the bolt clicked back and forth without firing. Empty.

                        Bailey reached for another magazine and was surprised to discover he had only one left.

                        "I'm running low!" He screamed, panicing. He was running out of ammunition now, when he was pinned down, taking fire from two sides with no hope of running to safety.

                        A soldier with a HMG glanced over his shoudler, ducked low and rifled through a pocket.

                        "SCAR-11, right?" He yelled.

                        "Ye-Yeah!"

                        The other soldier tossed the private a pair of magazines, but they landed short. The private didn't care. He crawled backwards and grabbed them both, stuffing them savagely into his pockets.

                        "Hit me! Baur!" Bellowed the Captain.

                        The soldier tossed him the needed ammunition.

                        "They're getting close over here!" Someone yelled.

                        Tipper screamed "Throwing frag!"

                        The grenade landed perfectly, killing one of the enemy soldiers and forcing the others back.

                        The private began firing again, rapidly depleting the first extra clip. He slapped the second one into place yelling "I need ammo!"

                        The HMG soldier looked at his despairingly.

                        "All out."

                        The private looked at his weapon as if he could see inside the magazine, where his last thirty rounds waited.

                        The Captain yelled "Convserve ammo!"

                        The private shuffled down the rise, keeping his weapon trained upwards.

                        There was another beep as the drone aquired a new target and tore him to shreds.

                        Then something flew into it, exploded in a blue ball of arced lighting and sent it crashing to the ground.

                        Tipper swore.

                        They began to pull together, keeping their guns trained out of their little fortress.

                        Then the private heard something.

                        There was a dull thump thump thump followed by loud explosions.

                        Bailey poked his head out of the hole and saw the APC, emblazoned with an ensigna that he'd thought he would never see again a moment ago.

                        "Captain! The column is here! It's right on top of us!" He screamed.

                        "I need a smoke grenade!" The Captain bellowed. One was tossed to him.

                        The Captain tore out the pin and threw it at his feet.

                        "GO GO GO!" He bellowed, charging towards the APC.

                        Behind it was the rest of the column, tanks, walkers, even a goliath.

                        At the back of the APC a door opened and a soldier began beckoning for them.

                        "COME ON!" He yelled.

                        The private ran, bullets whizzing through the air around him in both directions. Tipper was struck in the leg and he collapsed.

                        "Help!" He yelled.

                        "Bailey! Cover me!" Bellowed The Captain.

                        The private stopped running, turned and began firing as The Captain grabbed Tipper and began carrying him over his shoulder.

                        "I'm dry!" Screamed the private.

                        The Captain didn't hesitate. He threw his rifle to the private.

                        "Let's GO!" He shouted as the private began firing. At the end of the clip he turned and ran, catching up with The Captain at the door to the APC. Bailey was the last man to get aboard.

                        The soldier at the door clapped the private on the shoulder. "Good work soldier. They're falling back now."

                        The driver shouted back to them."Strap yourselves in! We're headed straight for the LZ!"

                        The Captain handed Tipper off to a medic and collapsed into a seat. The private followed suit, handing the rifle back to it's rightful owner.

                        "That was some good work out there soldier."

                        "Thank you sir."

                        The Captain flashed a toothy smile as he pulled his helmet off, exposing a very dirty face as the APC's engine rumbled to life, carrying the massive vehicle forwards towards it's destination.

                        "It's Cortez."

                        _________


                        Well, that's the end of the story for now. If I come up with anything else, it'll probably become it's own story.

                        Let me know what you thought of it!

                        -Avenger_One

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                        • androo671

                          #13
                          gah...getting more competition...need to eliminate you like i did with assault master....

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                          • Animal

                            #14
                            it rocks dude.. keep it up.. and u will have ur own little book xD lol

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                            • Fingulfin
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                              • Jun 2007
                              • 1433

                              #15
                              Can't believe I didn't see this until today... Freaking awesome mate, keep up the good work!

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