need Feedback

[Turdnugget]

Just did this little trailer for my clan and would appreciate any feedback that I could get on it, before i make it final. I already know that some of the text flies by a little to fast to read. Also that there is a spot where the rendering messed up a little bit at the end.

negative of positive all feedback is welcome.

http://www.gamevee.com/viewVideo/bf2142/PC/Killdu/828826

[imported_Field]

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ohhh lol good stuff. ohh im scared LOL. i dont know if you meant that or not but that was pretty funny

[Chris--My--azz]

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messy , very chaotic didn't go together very well atall

[fatmooseknuckle]

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um....mixed message. i thought most of the editing stuff was kinda cool. it was like a horror movie. BUT, the message was about fun, friendly play & just didn't go together. the footage or style of editing was more scary & looks like it should have been the message "fear us", "we come to haunt & pwn you", not "we're friendly & play well together". btw, was that a thundercats logo at the beginning?

[Shazanelli]

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Great editing and stuff. But as others said, felt like it was a trailer to a horror/thriller film. Didn't go with what you were trying to advertise. Also I personally would like to see more action footage and killings.