I didn't understand the video at all - no frags, no plot...
that was probably the biggest downfall, it just didn't make much sense.
You had some good angles (for it being one of your first videos), but a few tips:
don't use an effect just because you have it.
same with transitions
informal text tends to detract from the "professionalism" of a video.
don't start videos paused
screenshots in videos don't look too good
ground lighting on wake was nasty
I liked the music, but most of this community will probably complain about it.
*just another note lol
my best advice, is give it some plot, or at least a point to it so that it isn't so easy to pick apart and critic.
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