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  • Deleted_screen
    Member
    • Oct 2007
    • 183

    #1

    [Movie]

    About movie:
    "Hangar 04 - 2006" has been captured. The USMC troops have to defeat China/PLA before it's to late. That will be no trouble when Deleted_screen is with them...

    C4 FIGHTING SCENES!
    SLOW-MO SCENES!
    GOOD MUSIC!

    LIVE STREAM DOWNLOAD

    Post what you think about it!
  • Sir. Xios

    #2
    Re: [Movie]

    Nice try, but a few things you could improve on.

    There were a few sound issue with the gun fire/explosions, and I'm guessing this is where it has been recorded straight through fraps. Also if you type "renderer.drawhud 0" into the console you won't have any kill messages in the way (and we wouldn't know you were killing bots :p)

    I'm not sure what you used for editing but would have been slightly improved if you cut the fraps.com off the top. Slow-mo may have been slightly overused as well, a good way to improve slow-mo scenes is add your own sounds externally and slow them down. Also things like blurs and lighting changes can help to enhance the whole movie.

    Finally smooth camera movements really help to make movies stand out from others. This will just take practice and time though.

    Overall its not to bad, but keep working on your techniques. I didn't mean to be to harsh, just trying to help you improve.

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    • BrickInTheHead

      #3
      Re: [Movie]

      way too much slow mo

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      • Deleted_screen
        Member
        • Oct 2007
        • 183

        #4
        Re: [Movie]

        Originally posted by Sir. Xios
        Nice try, but a few things you could improve on.

        There were a few sound issue with the gun fire/explosions, and I'm guessing this is where it has been recorded straight through fraps. Also if you type "renderer.drawhud 0" into the console you won't have any kill messages in the way (and we wouldn't know you were killing bots :p)

        I'm not sure what you used for editing but would have been slightly improved if you cut the fraps.com off the top. Slow-mo may have been slightly overused as well, a good way to improve slow-mo scenes is add your own sounds externally and slow them down. Also things like blurs and lighting changes can help to enhance the whole movie.

        Finally smooth camera movements really help to make movies stand out from others. This will just take practice and time though.

        Overall its not to bad, but keep working on your techniques. I didn't mean to be to harsh, just trying to help you improve.
        Thanks. That was my first good movie... Should i only use Slow-Mo in the text in the end?

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