My very first model! :)

[nakedfrijoles]

Hey here is my very first model ever! lol tell me what you think.:p

[[WOLF]bbob]

Re: My very first model! :)

Handle is too short, the space from the slide to the barrel cover thingie is too big.. and a couple of detail errors not to mention the smoothing group mess ups

but very nice for a first timer I must say, im impressed :)

[nakedfrijoles]

Re: My very first model! :)

space from the slide to the barrel cover thingie is too big...? lol ,what?

[[WOLF]bbob]

Re: My very first model! :)

well, I do not know many english gun terms..

that hole where the casing comes out from, when that is foward (as in the picture) there is a internal part of the gun that covers the hole, that one is too far in on your gun.. in other words, the slide is too massive in terms of thickness on the sides..

(english is my second language, so sometimes im having problems formulating myself in said language)

[nakedfrijoles]

Re: My very first model! :)

ahh..ok gotcha , yea it is a little big lol

[Sir. Shpox]

Re: My very first model! :)

Very Nice for a first model, keep up the good work :)

[nakedfrijoles]

Re: My very first model! :)

Thank you, now i just have to figure out how to skin it:hmm: lol

[Eden]

Re: My very first model! :)

Can you post a wireframe view of it.

[nakedfrijoles]

Re: My very first model! :)

lol yea, rememeber im still a n00b modeler, so how do i get a wireframe view to render? heres a refined version, its a little better, though there is still something wrong with the handle shading or smoothing groups, im not sure what.

[nakedfrijoles]

Re: My very first model! :)

woops sorry wrong pic, here it is:

[Eden]

Re: My very first model! :)

Just take a screenshot of the wireframe in the viewport. no need to render it out.

[nakedfrijoles]

Re: My very first model! :)

Here ya go, some vertices are out of place i can see...

[Eden]

Re: My very first model! :)

If you plan to use this in a game, you do not need the inner tube of the barrel as no one is going to see it so that come be completely removed, you can either skin it so it looks like there is a hole there or make a small tube that only goes in about a centimere or two.

If highlighted a couple of other things. That will give you more room to put more detail on other parts of the gun.

edit: i just noticed how crappy the upload looks, if you cant read the green teaxt it says, you can use a bool operator to remove the back of the sphere.

[nakedfrijoles]

Re: My very first model! :)

ahh..thanks man that really helped!

Mind if i add you to msn?

[[WOLF]bbob]

Re: My very first model! :)

reminds me of the glock I made once..




before I heard about smoothing groups, lol